blueskaterboy

agreed, there is a guy on a local md forum that posts long stories for his "kills" in his honda. but at least he adds a short synopsis in the beginning for people who dont feel like reading bs

skud_dusty

Eh, like 20 minutes.





If you don't like it, don't read it. Simple as that.

blueskaterboy

well thats very "whitty" of you to remark.



but how could i decide if i like it or not BEFORE i read it? not very simple is it?



if you dont want opinions, then why did you post? you seemed to take the compliments pretty well. ok so the writing wasnt exactly bad, maybe your going to become the next george lucas or jrr tolkien or something but i mean you didnt actually "kill" anyone. i could be wrong but this isnt really the fantasy section, the "wish i had an rx7" section, or lounge.



EDIT: the guy on the md forum actually posts real kills, i dont read his kills because he usually posts about "killing" 17 second civics in a quite exciting fashion.

camocarl

Dont you have anything other to do skud than make up stories?

blueskaterboy

holy **** 13b first gen!

skud_dusty

Well, if you'd really like to hear about my 15 second Neon killing ****, I'll more than gladly post that ****.



Obviously it's fake, a peripheal port + nitrous fb on the street? Comeon...



If you don't like the fact that I made up a fake story, then, no offense, but **** you. I didn't ask if you liked that I made it up. All I care about is what you actually think of the writing.





Actually I've got lots better things to do, but sometimes in my spare time this is what I like to do. Some people read books, some people watch tv... I write stories as they come to me.

blueskaterboy

good writers dont use cliches or slang, especially not incorrectly



i dont know anything about FBs, and i think neither do the people that actually believed you.



again, i thought this was a kills section... there are entire sites dedicated to creative writing where you can submit your **** and they get certified people to review it for you.



stop trying to be smart. its making you seem more the opposite everytime you say something "whitty."



im just saying, i had to read that huge thing. made me upset that it was not true. it lead me on. maybe just for the sake of keeping me from crying next time, if you would be courteous enough to put a disclaimer, "not a real kill, if you dont like fake kills, do not read." that would be nice.

skud_dusty

Thank you, I'll remember that next time.







You didn't have to read **** man, you chose to read this bigass long story. Whoopty ******* do, I wasted a few minutes of your time. Who cares if it's fake or not? Before you knew it was fake, how did it make you feel?

Triniwarrior31

nice story, 2 bad its not true

turbo2fc90

NIce kill ma. LOng story...