A English Paper
09-22-2003, 03:42 PM
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hahahaa.. I used to have a classmate who would do the same crap.. .What a stupid bitch.. if she didn;t look so hot I would have thrown my shoe at her.. But then the teacher would just always mention if it was gonna be on the test or not... before anyone would ask..
09-22-2003, 09:35 PM
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Well for your information i do suck at english. And i cant spell for **** but you should know that from my posts by now. And spell check did that **** i jsut hit auto correct i fixed it all today. But other than that any one got some good advice i have 2 more day's till it's due.
09-22-2003, 09:50 PM
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09-23-2003, 05:53 AM
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As I awoke I found a terrible burden upon my self. The moon was high and my skin burned. I knew I was about to embark on a terrible mission, but I could do nothing to stop myself. My skin slowly began to change. It burned with a fiery hatred unlike any, a fiery hatred straight from the depths of hell. Hair started to protrude, muscles tensing time and time again. It could not be stopped now, the change too far along. As I fell to the floor, my legs and arms became the same. Fingernails turned to razor sharp claws. My jaw was now as strong as a bear, my bite worse than a viper. As blood ran through my veins my hatred grew. The urge to kill was now fully upon my liken body. I ran out of the marsh at full speed.
As I arrived at the halls of Herot, the death of all those within lingered on in my mind. My sleeping prey unknowingly, haunted by the hour of its demise. I quickly reached the great hall in which my sleeping prey await. With every passing second my hunger for blood rose within me. As I reached the doors of this great hall, the smell of my prey filled my nostrils. I rushed against the door and with one hard hit of my claws the door broke into hundreds of pieces and flew off of its iron-forged hinges, my strength was never so great before. Inside I saw the prey, the warriors that were about to satisfy my urge for blood. They slept two by two on top of one another in rows down each side of this great hall. I ran to the closest warrior and ripped him out of his sweet succulent slumber. Before he had even awoke I had bitten him and drained his body dry of all blood. I tore him limb from limb till there was nothing left. Not a scream, not a whimper or even a whisper came from him. The only sound was of his bones crunching under my powerful bite. As I finished him off one of the other warriors seemed to be watching. He then became my next target. He was much bigger than the rest but none the less food for my belly. I rushed toward him with the speed of a thousand sprinters. As soon as I stood in front of him he grabbed my neck with one of his hands, and I knew then at that very point that no man that I had ever seen before or since had this kind of strength. I quickly struck with my jaws open at him but I returned with nothing but lungs gasping for air. This mere mortal was choking me. He then bound my claws, I now had no way to fight or free myself. I struggled, surged, gasped and shook but no matter what I could not free myself. We battled for what seemed like hours as we brushed against the walls of this great hall. This man wanted nothing less than my death. All of the warriors in the hall had now been awakened and had come to help rid me from this earth. But no mortal’s sword was sharp enough to break my skin. Only this one man had the strength to hold me at bay. As the leader of the pack had finally decided he had enough, he ripped my arm straight from its socket. Pain soared through my body as he held my arm high all I could think about was getting away. I ran from that great hall with such speed mere man could not fathom.
Soon I arrived at the marsh and quickly went to my lair. The change was already starting to take place. I was now becoming once again what I had hated so much just seconds before. As I my hairy skin once again turned back to flesh I knew I would never again change. My arm held high as a trophy by a man stronger than all men, By the head honcho. I felt my life leaving me as blood ran from my gaping wound. Soon I knew it would be allover as I fell to the ground. My lair began to blur the light seemed to dim. I Tensed up as I went into a state of which I cant explain my blood pooling on the floor my life leaving me. All was over as I passed.
As I arrived at the halls of Herot, the death of all those within lingered on in my mind. My sleeping prey unknowingly, haunted by the hour of its demise. I quickly reached the great hall in which my sleeping prey await. With every passing second my hunger for blood rose within me. As I reached the doors of this great hall, the smell of my prey filled my nostrils. I rushed against the door and with one hard hit of my claws the door broke into hundreds of pieces and flew off of its iron-forged hinges, my strength was never so great before. Inside I saw the prey, the warriors that were about to satisfy my urge for blood. They slept two by two on top of one another in rows down each side of this great hall. I ran to the closest warrior and ripped him out of his sweet succulent slumber. Before he had even awoke I had bitten him and drained his body dry of all blood. I tore him limb from limb till there was nothing left. Not a scream, not a whimper or even a whisper came from him. The only sound was of his bones crunching under my powerful bite. As I finished him off one of the other warriors seemed to be watching. He then became my next target. He was much bigger than the rest but none the less food for my belly. I rushed toward him with the speed of a thousand sprinters. As soon as I stood in front of him he grabbed my neck with one of his hands, and I knew then at that very point that no man that I had ever seen before or since had this kind of strength. I quickly struck with my jaws open at him but I returned with nothing but lungs gasping for air. This mere mortal was choking me. He then bound my claws, I now had no way to fight or free myself. I struggled, surged, gasped and shook but no matter what I could not free myself. We battled for what seemed like hours as we brushed against the walls of this great hall. This man wanted nothing less than my death. All of the warriors in the hall had now been awakened and had come to help rid me from this earth. But no mortal’s sword was sharp enough to break my skin. Only this one man had the strength to hold me at bay. As the leader of the pack had finally decided he had enough, he ripped my arm straight from its socket. Pain soared through my body as he held my arm high all I could think about was getting away. I ran from that great hall with such speed mere man could not fathom.
Soon I arrived at the marsh and quickly went to my lair. The change was already starting to take place. I was now becoming once again what I had hated so much just seconds before. As I my hairy skin once again turned back to flesh I knew I would never again change. My arm held high as a trophy by a man stronger than all men, By the head honcho. I felt my life leaving me as blood ran from my gaping wound. Soon I knew it would be allover as I fell to the ground. My lair began to blur the light seemed to dim. I Tensed up as I went into a state of which I cant explain my blood pooling on the floor my life leaving me. All was over as I passed.
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