Rx7 Haiku
#11
Originally Posted by Srce' date='Sep 10 2003, 10:52 AM
[quote name='j9fd3s' date='Sep 10 2003, 01:49 PM'] srce knows hiaku
he eats lots of cereal
um something goes here
mike
he eats lots of cereal
um something goes here
mike
special k is good
special t is gooder
and um a chicken
#12
Originally Posted by j9fd3s' date='Sep 10 2003, 01:53 PM
[quote name='Srce' date='Sep 10 2003, 10:52 AM'] [quote name='j9fd3s' date='Sep 10 2003, 01:49 PM'] srce knows hiaku
he eats lots of cereal
um something goes here
mike
he eats lots of cereal
um something goes here
mike
special k is good
special t is gooder
and um a chicken [/quote]
#13
techincally yours arent haiku either kid.....haiku format of writing may be the 5, 7, 5 ....but a haiku is strickly about nature...and ur subject is far from nature....it is machine
with that said
my haiku = teh best
with that said
my haiku = teh best