allright im new at this so be nice.
rotary haiku forever they spin flash of ignition chow fumes exhaust pops and flames turbo haiku spooling under boost whine of turbo is evil blow off valve is loud thank you, thank you. i try my best. https://www.nopistons.com/forums/pub...#>/biggrin.png |
cmon now. i got 13 views so far and no feed back. i put my heart and soul into this. https://www.nopistons.com/forums/pub...>/rolleyes.gif right. somebody has to tell me to quit or try again. its only the nice thing to do. who doesnt like poetry? https://www.nopistons.com/forums/pub..._DIR#>/dry.png
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nice i guess
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This isn't quite as terrifying as linux poetry or roy oribision in cling film but it's getting there.
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*cough cough* check sig son *cough cough*
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those are good srce. but they arent haiku. thats what i was going for. its 5 syllables, then 7, then 5. its harder that hell to think of stuff like that with the right syllable though. its fun when your all buzzed up and listening to floyd er sumpin. heh. well thanks for the feed back guys i appreciate it.
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Originally Posted by rotary rebel' date='Sep 10 2003, 01:18 PM
those are good srce. but they arent haiku. thats what i was going for. its 5 syllables, then 7, then 5. its harder that hell to think of stuff like that with the right syllable though. its fun when your all buzzed up and listening to floyd er sumpin. heh. well thanks for the feed back guys i appreciate it.
I was just pointing out that the sig rules. That's all. LOL |
srce knows hiaku
he eats lots of cereal um something goes here mike |
Originally Posted by j9fd3s' date='Sep 10 2003, 01:49 PM
srce knows hiaku
he eats lots of cereal um something goes here mike |
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you are a dumb cuckoo ass look at me woo woo kevin |
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