allright im new at this so be nice.



rotary haiku

forever they spin

flash of ignition chow fumes

exhaust pops and flames





turbo haiku

spooling under boost

whine of turbo is evil

blow off valve is loud





thank you, thank you.

i try my best.

 

cmon now. i got 13 views so far and no feed back. i put my heart and soul into this. right. somebody has to tell me to quit or try again. its only the nice thing to do. who doesnt like poetry?

 

nice i guess

 

This isn't quite as terrifying as linux poetry or roy oribision in cling film but it's getting there.

 

*cough cough* check sig son *cough cough*

 

those are good srce. but they arent haiku. thats what i was going for. its 5 syllables, then 7, then 5. its harder that hell to think of stuff like that with the right syllable though. its fun when your all buzzed up and listening to floyd er sumpin. heh. well thanks for the feed back guys i appreciate it.

 

I know what aHaiku is and how to write one. We did it a few weeks ago and it turned out (like everything here) to be a *****fest.



I was just pointing out that the sig rules. That's all. LOL

 

srce knows hiaku

he eats lots of cereal

um something goes here



mike

 

Indeed, had some SpecialT, I mean SpecialK this morning.

 

look at me loo loo

you are a dumb cuckoo ***

look at me woo woo



kevin