New Song In The Works !
#1
i attached the intro so far, just 20 seconds not much and its off timing with the 2 guitars because I was doing it last night at 12 silent :O haha.
These are the lyrics I have so far, nothing fully set yet of course and if you guys like to give me ideas I would appreciate it. The intro is slow but this isn't a slow crying song, it's a more upbeat heavier song. Anyone listen to senses fail here? Thats what this type of song reminds me of, as well as motion city soundtrack and mae and amber pacific if that rings a bell to anyone here. Anyway here ya go..
Bridge:
for your lips are my canvas
and your lipstick my brush
I bet you cant wait for my next masterpeice
like I couldn't wait for your heart to stop
Chours:
come on baby lets create this atmosphere
come on baby all it takes is a little tryin'
so come on come on baby lets create this atmosphere
come on baby lets create this atmosphere
come on baby all it takes is a little tryin'
so come on come on baby lets create this atmosphere
lets make like capone and blow this joint
Im trying to make the chours upbeat and repeating like most songs but I changed up the last line to end it on a different melody/note.
Watcha all think?
[attachment=33564:attachment] opps heres the song
These are the lyrics I have so far, nothing fully set yet of course and if you guys like to give me ideas I would appreciate it. The intro is slow but this isn't a slow crying song, it's a more upbeat heavier song. Anyone listen to senses fail here? Thats what this type of song reminds me of, as well as motion city soundtrack and mae and amber pacific if that rings a bell to anyone here. Anyway here ya go..
Bridge:
for your lips are my canvas
and your lipstick my brush
I bet you cant wait for my next masterpeice
like I couldn't wait for your heart to stop
Chours:
come on baby lets create this atmosphere
come on baby all it takes is a little tryin'
so come on come on baby lets create this atmosphere
come on baby lets create this atmosphere
come on baby all it takes is a little tryin'
so come on come on baby lets create this atmosphere
lets make like capone and blow this joint
Im trying to make the chours upbeat and repeating like most songs but I changed up the last line to end it on a different melody/note.
Watcha all think?
[attachment=33564:attachment] opps heres the song
#6
i find people on nopistons amusing shane so, yes it is rather funny to read what people say. However I'd like to see someone who can write more poetic songs than me! A contest I assume shall be in the works, prize hmm say bragging rights ?
#8
any good ideas for me boxers? I know what you mean but sometimes its the cheesy stuff that sticks better in someones head ya know? Plus ya haven't really heard the melody yet for it which might change your mind about the lyrics. How ya like the intro
#9
just do something like:
Whatcha gonna do with all that junk
all that junk inside your trunk
I'ma get get get get you drunk
get you love drunk off my hump
my hump my hump my hump my hump my hump
my hump my hump my hump my lovely little lumps
Check it out
I drive these brothers crazy
I do it on the daily
they treat me really nicely
They buy me all these ice
Dolce and Gabbana
Fendi and that Donna Karan
They be sharin
All their money got me wearing fly
Whether I aint askin
They say they love mah *** in
Seven Jeans
True religion
I say no
but they keep givin
So I keep on takin
And no I aint takin
We can keep on takin
Now keep on demonstratin
My love my love my love my love
you love my lady lumps
my hump my hump my hump
my humps they got you..
Shes got me spending..
Ohh..Spending all your money on me..and spending time on me..
Shes got me spending..
Ohh..Spending all your money on me..uh on me on me..
Whatcha gonna do with all that junk
all that junk inside that trunk..
I'ma get get get get you drunk
get you love drunk off my hump
Whatcha gonna do with all that ***
all that *** inside your jeans
I'ma make make make make you scream
make you scream make you scream
Cause of my humps my hump my hump my hump
my hump my hump my hump my lovely lady lumps
Check it out
I met a girl down at the disco
She said hey hey hey ya lets go
I can be ya baby, you could be my honey
Lets spend time not money
And mix your milk with my coco puff
milky milky coco
mix your milk with my coco puff
Milky milky
Riiiiight...
They say I'm really sexy
The boys they wanna sex me
They always standin next to me
Always dancin next to me
tryna feel my hump hump
Lookin at my lump lump
you can look but you can't touch it
if you touch it
I'ma start some drama
you don't want no drama
No no drama no no no no drama
So don't
Pull on my hand boy
you aint my man boy
I'm just tryna dance boy
And move my hump
my hump my hump my hump my hump my hump my hump
my hump my hump my hump my hump my lovely lady lumps
my lovely lady lumps my lovely lady lumps
In the back and in the front
my loving got you..
Shes got me spending..
Ohh..Spending all your money on me..and spending time on me..
Shes got me spending..
Ohh..Spending all your money on me..uh on me on me..
Whatcha gonna do with all that junk
all that junk inside that trunk
I'ma get get get get you drunk
get you love drunk off my hump
Whatcha gonna do with all that ***
all that *** inside your jeans
I'ma make make make make you scream
make you scream make you scream
Whatcha gonna do with all that junk
all that junk inside that trunk
I'ma get get get get you drunk
get you love drunk off this hump
Whatcha gonna do with all that breast
all that breast inside that shirt
I'ma make make make make you work
make you work work make you work
Shes got me spending..
Ohh..Spending all your money on me..and spending time on me..
Shes got me spending..
Ohh..Spending all your money on me..uh on me on me..
Whatcha gonna do with all that junk
all that junk inside your trunk
I'ma get get get get you drunk
get you love drunk off my hump
my hump my hump my hump my hump my hump
my hump my hump my hump my lovely little lumps
Check it out
I drive these brothers crazy
I do it on the daily
they treat me really nicely
They buy me all these ice
Dolce and Gabbana
Fendi and that Donna Karan
They be sharin
All their money got me wearing fly
Whether I aint askin
They say they love mah *** in
Seven Jeans
True religion
I say no
but they keep givin
So I keep on takin
And no I aint takin
We can keep on takin
Now keep on demonstratin
My love my love my love my love
you love my lady lumps
my hump my hump my hump
my humps they got you..
Shes got me spending..
Ohh..Spending all your money on me..and spending time on me..
Shes got me spending..
Ohh..Spending all your money on me..uh on me on me..
Whatcha gonna do with all that junk
all that junk inside that trunk..
I'ma get get get get you drunk
get you love drunk off my hump
Whatcha gonna do with all that ***
all that *** inside your jeans
I'ma make make make make you scream
make you scream make you scream
Cause of my humps my hump my hump my hump
my hump my hump my hump my lovely lady lumps
Check it out
I met a girl down at the disco
She said hey hey hey ya lets go
I can be ya baby, you could be my honey
Lets spend time not money
And mix your milk with my coco puff
milky milky coco
mix your milk with my coco puff
Milky milky
Riiiiight...
They say I'm really sexy
The boys they wanna sex me
They always standin next to me
Always dancin next to me
tryna feel my hump hump
Lookin at my lump lump
you can look but you can't touch it
if you touch it
I'ma start some drama
you don't want no drama
No no drama no no no no drama
So don't
Pull on my hand boy
you aint my man boy
I'm just tryna dance boy
And move my hump
my hump my hump my hump my hump my hump my hump
my hump my hump my hump my hump my lovely lady lumps
my lovely lady lumps my lovely lady lumps
In the back and in the front
my loving got you..
Shes got me spending..
Ohh..Spending all your money on me..and spending time on me..
Shes got me spending..
Ohh..Spending all your money on me..uh on me on me..
Whatcha gonna do with all that junk
all that junk inside that trunk
I'ma get get get get you drunk
get you love drunk off my hump
Whatcha gonna do with all that ***
all that *** inside your jeans
I'ma make make make make you scream
make you scream make you scream
Whatcha gonna do with all that junk
all that junk inside that trunk
I'ma get get get get you drunk
get you love drunk off this hump
Whatcha gonna do with all that breast
all that breast inside that shirt
I'ma make make make make you work
make you work work make you work
Shes got me spending..
Ohh..Spending all your money on me..and spending time on me..
Shes got me spending..
Ohh..Spending all your money on me..uh on me on me..