i attached the intro so far, just 20 seconds not much and its off timing with the 2 guitars because I was doing it last night at 12 silent :O haha.
These are the lyrics I have so far, nothing fully set yet of course and if you guys like to give me ideas I would appreciate it. The intro is slow but this isn't a slow crying song, it's a more upbeat heavier song. Anyone listen to senses fail here? Thats what this type of song reminds me of, as well as motion city soundtrack and mae and amber pacific if that rings a bell to anyone here. Anyway here ya go.. Bridge: for your lips are my canvas and your lipstick my brush I bet you cant wait for my next masterpeice like I couldn't wait for your heart to stop Chours: come on baby lets create this atmosphere come on baby all it takes is a little tryin' so come on come on baby lets create this atmosphere come on baby lets create this atmosphere come on baby all it takes is a little tryin' so come on come on baby lets create this atmosphere lets make like capone and blow this joint Im trying to make the chours upbeat and repeating like most songs but I changed up the last line to end it on a different melody/note. Watcha all think? https://www.nopistons.com/forums/pub...IR#>/bigok.gif [attachment=33564:attachment] opps heres the song |
Give me a second, I have a song in the works myself.
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i didnt listen to the song bc im at work with no sound so the song didnt influence this statement.
do you get off on people making fun of you or something? |
All you need is a little patience.
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i find people on nopistons amusing shane so, yes it is rather funny to read what people say. However I'd like to see someone who can write more poetic songs than me! A contest I assume shall be in the works, prize hmm say bragging rights ?
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honestly. i think the lyrics for the bridge are really good..
but the chorus seems kinda just... hmm repetitive and "come on baby" seems kinda cheesy.. like you ran out of words to use. |
any good ideas for me boxers? I know what you mean but sometimes its the cheesy stuff that sticks better in someones head ya know? Plus ya haven't really heard the melody yet for it which might change your mind about the lyrics. How ya like the intro
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just do something like:
Whatcha gonna do with all that junk all that junk inside your trunk I'ma get get get get you drunk get you love drunk off my hump my hump my hump my hump my hump my hump my hump my hump my hump my lovely little lumps Check it out I drive these brothers crazy I do it on the daily they treat me really nicely They buy me all these ice Dolce and Gabbana Fendi and that Donna Karan They be sharin All their money got me wearing fly Whether I aint askin They say they love mah ass in Seven Jeans True religion I say no but they keep givin So I keep on takin And no I aint takin We can keep on takin Now keep on demonstratin My love my love my love my love you love my lady lumps my hump my hump my hump my humps they got you.. Shes got me spending.. Ohh..Spending all your money on me..and spending time on me.. Shes got me spending.. Ohh..Spending all your money on me..uh on me on me.. Whatcha gonna do with all that junk all that junk inside that trunk.. I'ma get get get get you drunk get you love drunk off my hump Whatcha gonna do with all that ass all that ass inside your jeans I'ma make make make make you scream make you scream make you scream Cause of my humps my hump my hump my hump my hump my hump my hump my lovely lady lumps Check it out I met a girl down at the disco She said hey hey hey ya lets go I can be ya baby, you could be my honey Lets spend time not money And mix your milk with my coco puff milky milky coco mix your milk with my coco puff Milky milky Riiiiight... They say I'm really sexy The boys they wanna sex me They always standin next to me Always dancin next to me tryna feel my hump hump Lookin at my lump lump you can look but you can't touch it if you touch it I'ma start some drama you don't want no drama No no drama no no no no drama So don't Pull on my hand boy you aint my man boy I'm just tryna dance boy And move my hump my hump my hump my hump my hump my hump my hump my hump my hump my hump my hump my lovely lady lumps my lovely lady lumps my lovely lady lumps In the back and in the front my loving got you.. Shes got me spending.. Ohh..Spending all your money on me..and spending time on me.. Shes got me spending.. Ohh..Spending all your money on me..uh on me on me.. Whatcha gonna do with all that junk all that junk inside that trunk I'ma get get get get you drunk get you love drunk off my hump Whatcha gonna do with all that ass all that ass inside your jeans I'ma make make make make you scream make you scream make you scream Whatcha gonna do with all that junk all that junk inside that trunk I'ma get get get get you drunk get you love drunk off this hump Whatcha gonna do with all that breast all that breast inside that shirt I'ma make make make make you work make you work work make you work Shes got me spending.. Ohh..Spending all your money on me..and spending time on me.. Shes got me spending.. Ohh..Spending all your money on me..uh on me on me.. |
haha beautiful. im glad someone else knows that song! do you like it? its got mad beat in my car
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